As always your work is beautiful, and I love your treatment of the type, I have troubles with mixing type and images so I always appreicate when others can. If you don't mind answering, what font did you use for this piece or is it your own creation.
you should consider taking out the words. it takes away from the image quality, at least for me, its kind or like having a water note embedded in the image. i view white as the inhale and black as the exhale...no need to put the words. just considerations nice work though
weirdly, the 'ha' issue on 'inhale' seems 'off' to me. Maybe if you give those letters a little (just a little) more definition (keeping the transparency, is that possible? :/) it would be harder to get lost while reading